Evaluation of feedback from pitch containing print product ideas

Print Product Feedback:

Do you still want to complete/improve and why?

- We would still want to complete the entire pitch in great detail.
- We would like to improve the lettering designs, giving more examples for the audience to pick from.
- We would of also liked to have a clear focus on what the title of the short film should be.

Positive feedback

- The use of the eye with the reflection of the anonymous runner, worked really well according to the feedback, they prefered that draft idea to the other one,

- The colour scheme; as it addresses our locations, in hollow ponds.

- The layout of the review was also positive for the audience as the one big image works.

What points were you able to address?

- The title of the film.

- Making the colour scheme work and link.

This evaluation helped us distinguish what to change and what we could do better, without this we wouldn't know