Notes and analysis of two examples of short films, SUMMER TASK

In this exercise I learnt how short films are put together, how they flow consistently, what attracts the audience and what doesn't, I did this in order for me to decide what I should include in my short film and what doesn't work generically. The aspects I would improve would be the generic conventions and the genre to make It more interesting with an edge. From this I will know for sure that i would to involve two genres mixing them slightly.