Evaluation of feedback from pitch containing print product ideas

Print Product Feedback:

Do you still want to complete/improve and why?

- We would still want to complete the entire pitch in great detail.
- We would like to improve the lettering designs, giving more examples for the audience to pick from.
- We would of also liked to have a clear focus on what the title of the short film should be.

Positive feedback

- The use of the eye with the reflection of the anonymous runner, worked really well according to the feedback, they prefered that draft idea to the other one,

- The colour scheme; as it addresses our locations, in hollow ponds.

- The layout of the review was also positive for the audience as the one big image works.

What points were you able to address?

- The title of the film.

- Making the colour scheme work and link.

This evaluation helped us distinguish what to change and what we could do better, without this we wouldn't know

Team meeting for print production

In this week's team meeting we discussed;

1) Simone and I will focus more on the poster production as we have Photoshop skills.


2) Shorai will do the journalism because she is very good with English skills.


3) Benedicte will be doing the photography at the shoot booked Thursday 8/1/15 because she is very skilled at photography.


4) we decided on colours which are green, white and black because it represents our film locations as well as the narrative. In this week's team meeting we discussed who will do what in terms of the production of the print products and how we will split it fairly. As all of us have better skills from other subjects

Actual pitch for print products, made on prezi that we used in video

This is the pitch we showed everyone, but we explained it in more detail which is shown in the previous post in the recording we submitted using youtube.

Pitch for print product

This is the pitch for our print products where we discussed everything we will include miss en scene , layout to colours and what type of images we will be using.

Final 'ON THE RUN'

This is the final piece, where we changed certain critiques from the audience feedback

Evaluation from feedback on the rough cut

This is the evaluation i made on prezi discussing and presenting the feedback we got from our pitch on the rough cut video. What we will change and what we will consider to implement. This helps us see exactly what the specific target audience expects and will find appealing.

Rough cut of short film

This is the first draft of on the run, where there will be errors that would of been fixed for the final video.